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 Aug 1 2005, 06:51 AM | Post #1 |
 
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Speak to him and ask him his story. He'll tell you about a jewelry heist. He'll say how he found Valdez walking by in fine cloths by something in dirty rags*. Suspciously Rennard hit him over the head with jewels and took the staff and went to a tavern, but realised it was a godly staff and knew of someone who'd want it - A powerful god lived in the North-east, took the Mahjarrat away from Icthlarin's control.
(That last sentence doesn't sound right also but I dunno.)
Speak to him and ask his story. He tells you he was hired by Kharrim when Kharrim was in a drunken stupor.
(Dunno what the correct story is, but I don't think Kharrim should be there twice.)
She explains how nobody in her Lord's enemies camp really liked each other and plotted against each other often, *and this distrust allowed her to spy more easily by blaming it on an unsuspecting necromancer or a foolish Mahjarrat.
The Mahjarrat didn't appreciate being taken from being slaves of Icthlarin to being slaves of this Evil Lord, and under Zamorak the Mahjarrat made plans to overthrow this Evil Lord.
He'll tell you of a fool named Kharrim who stumbled into their tavern and had the god-staff of Armadyl, *and although at first he thought it was a test of loyalty, he realised soon discovered it was the real deal and it might aid them in their rebellion against their evil lord.
Sorry if I seem kind of mean pointing out these small mistakes, but I didn't really see any other other typos in other guides and I guessed I'd point these out.
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Aug 1 2005, 01:45 PM | Post #2 |
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Aug 3 2005, 01:43 AM | Post #3 |
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QUOTE(Loggy @ Aug 1 2005, 02:51 AM)
Awesome Guide, I just saw some mistakes and fixed 'em:
Speak to him and ask his story. He tells you he was hired by Kharrim when Kharrim was in a drunken stupor.
(Dunno what the correct story is, but I don't think Kharrim should be there twice.)
Speak to him and ask his story. He tells you he was hired by Kharrim when Kharrim was in a drunken stupor.
(Dunno what the correct story is, but I don't think Kharrim should be there twice.)
That part is correct, the NPC was hired by a Kharrim, who was in a drunken stupor. It could be reworded better though.
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