Tangerz

Sep 7 2007, 08:38 PM | Post #16

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QUOTE(Cafebcs @ Sep 7 2007, 03:21 PM) [snapback]100191[/snapback]

I want mines too at reading ur comment please be constructive.

con·struc·tive /kənˈstrʌktɪv/
–adjective
1. constructing or tending to construct; helping to improve; promoting further development or advancement (opposed to destructive): constructive criticism.

I'm pretty sure that these comments were directed to the fact that you need to get better at film making and learn how to make videos interesting. Hence, the word, constructive.

Five (not to be taken literally) minutes of you walking around your house, the Chaos Temple, watching Hazeel is NOT interesting in the least bit.

There, I offered constructive criticism.

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Teh Evil

Sep 7 2007, 08:40 PM | Post #17

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QUOTE(Cafebcs @ Sep 7 2007, 02:21 PM) [snapback]100191[/snapback]

I want mines too at reading ur comment please be constructive.

Stop making videos. If you don't, make them non boring.

That's constructive.

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Iamanarab

Sep 7 2007, 08:55 PM | Post #18

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Cafebcs, If you don't like people saying what you should do to make your videos better, or saying anything like that, then you shouldn't post them.

The whole point of criticism is so you can learn from it, and make better (read:Interesting) videos.
Is that not what you want?

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dragunslayr9

Sep 7 2007, 10:40 PM | Post #19

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I watched it again, trying desperately in vain to find some sort of subtle, hidden humour that would make it all worth it.
Nope. Didn't find any.

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Baakalor

Sep 8 2007, 12:56 AM | Post #20

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Asking for constructive comments is asking for people to make comments that you can use to make your product better. It does NOT mean that all of those comments will be positive. If you limit comments to only those that are positive, you will often find that you have a thread with no replies. You already know the positives of your work, you don't need anyone else to stroke your ego.

Those comments that say the videos are boring, uninteresting, etc., are being honest in their personal opinions. What you might ask them is what you can do to make them more interesting instead of telling them their comments are not constructive merely because they are not positive.

If you want people to give you replies like "Great!", "Super job!", "I love it!", etc, then you do have to listen to the negative comments that are given. Those comments are telling you what you need to do to get people to enjoy your work.

I realize that your command of the English language is not as good as some of the others here and you may be confusing 'constructive' with 'positive.'

Now, constructive comments:
1) I didn't make it past the first 30 seconds of any of those videos with the exception of the 7th one. I watched it all the way through to see if there was any improvement from your first one. None of them held any interest for me. There just isn't anything going on that is exciting, funny, or....anything. They're just kind of like water. Blah.

2) Use different camera angles in making your vids. A constant angle, overhead shot is pointless. No decent shots at all.

3) Think about your subject matter. Your videos contain nothing we cannot get by playing the game ourselves. Give us entertainment. Give us something to make us laugh or think or go "Wow!" Don't give us something that makes us think we wasted our time.

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Iamanarab

Sep 8 2007, 01:02 AM | Post #21

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I love you Baak

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Cafebcs

Sep 8 2007, 02:14 AM | Post #22

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Cafebcs Episode 04 - A Normal Day

This post has been edited by Cafebcs: Jan 4 2008, 10:08 PM

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Iamanarab

Sep 8 2007, 02:32 AM | Post #23

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The problem is, everyone here has experienced RS life, and doesn't find it interesting, because they've done it before. Thats why your videos don't appeal

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Cafebcs

Sep 8 2007, 02:35 AM | Post #24

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Cafebcs Episode 05 - Hanging With Delila25

This post has been edited by Cafebcs: Jan 4 2008, 09:58 PM

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Splatman

Sep 8 2007, 02:14 PM | Post #25

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They're pointless, your house is not interesting, neither is your rs life. :|

Go do some kamikaze pking and tape that. Thank you.

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Zaw1314

Sep 8 2007, 03:27 PM | Post #26

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QUOTE(Splatman @ Sep 8 2007, 10:14 AM) [snapback]100226[/snapback]

Go do some kamikaze pking and tape that. Thank you.

Now that would be interesting to me.

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Cafebcs

Sep 8 2007, 09:23 PM | Post #27

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Cafebcs Episode 06 - The Chaos Temple

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Iamanarab

Sep 8 2007, 09:43 PM | Post #28

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So would the common sense thing to do be that you make a PKing video, and post it in the right forum?

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Laugher

Sep 13 2007, 09:52 PM | Post #29

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Overall: 0.2/10 Only because you did give an effort, I think.
Content is crap, not a damn thing happens. You and your cool friends are boring as hell. Do something already instead of just walking around and stuff. Your videos blow.

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Mysticallity

Sep 14 2007, 07:10 PM | Post #30

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Thread cleaned! (ish)

I think we have enough posts on the boredom aspect. Let us start offering suggestions and improvements.

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